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I showed what I have so far for the animations of  'Overcoming the monster' and 'Rebirth'.
Feedback:

• the concept is clear for Overcoming the monster.
• learning something new in third year is probably not a good idea but looks good
• use multicolours at the end of Rebirth to effectively communicate it
• the concepts are interesting and not what you would typically think of in relation to the traditional plots.
• in Overcoming the Monster, the heart itself could change colour to show the emotion radiating through it.